Amazing!
But as a musitian, I must say your melody should stand out more. You shold make it a bit louder. However, even with that issue it's still worthy of my 10 points. If you make it better I would give you over 9000/10 if I could.
Amazing!
But as a musitian, I must say your melody should stand out more. You shold make it a bit louder. However, even with that issue it's still worthy of my 10 points. If you make it better I would give you over 9000/10 if I could.
Yeah, I know what you mean. I'm obviously not as polished as, say, ParagonX9's Metropolis, but I'm still very satisfied with what I make, and I'm glad you enjoyed it, and appreciate the feedback. =)
Great!
only thing, the lyrics are:
hide and seek
CHAINS and sewing machines....
Oh... The lyrics I looked up was trains and sewing machines. I'm pretty sure thats right because it suppose to represent childrens toys. But maybe.
It's great, but..
The melody needs to stand out more for the piano, when it's supposed to be the forus of the song at that time, it's actually REALLY quiet. Great other than that. I'll probably fave it if you fix just the ending.
I'm probly gonna totally remake this soon, Thanks alot for the review ;)
Great!
Wow, I love the rhythm and melody to this. I can't wait to see more from you.
thanks.
you should check out some of my other stuff.
(the stuff with the votes above 1.50 lol)
wow.
Amazing, simply amazing MAKE MORE!
THIS IS GREAT!!!!!
Thanks
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Joined on 8/31/08